Janya’s slide 

 Hi Sauviri I am really looking forward to you helping me in my writing.

 My Whanau 

In the holidays I went to fiji with my mum, my dad, my sister and my brother.We drove to a huge eye catching hotel and the hotels name was sofitel .We had a tour all around and me my sister and brother liked the swimming pool the best because it was huge and had a medium sized flowery island .When we came out from the pool I had a short turn on a boogie board then we went to our hotel number ate some delicious pizza and went to bed.

Haunted Orphanage

    Haunted Orphanage!!!  

After I came back from My friends birthday party I was on my way home when suddenly I saw an old looking orphanage so I gently pushed open the rough rusty gate. I was so scared the gate made a creaking noise suddenly fog burst everywhere it smelt like a graveyard after all I wasn't scared at all!!! “AAAHHH”! I felt someone touch my shoulder I plunged across some slimy gooey water and ran inside the orphanage behind me I slammed the door BANG! I walked quietly up the stairs.To be continued...   

                                     Haunted Orphanage