Haunted Orphanage!!!
After I came back from My friends birthday party I was on my way home when suddenly I saw an old looking orphanage so I gently pushed open the rough rusty gate. I was so scared the gate made a creaking noise suddenly fog burst everywhere it smelt like a graveyard after all I wasn't scared at all!!! “AAAHHH”! I felt someone touch my shoulder I plunged across some slimy gooey water and ran inside the orphanage behind me I slammed the door BANG! I walked quietly up the stairs.To be continued...
Haunted Orphanage
Great story! It's a cool idea to write about a haunted orphanage! Try adding more punctuation.
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