school itis practice

Me and my friend Aisha had a lovely time building this castle.

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National trust chirk castle facts

Janya’s Slide

National trust chirk castle

National trust chirk castle was built in the 1295.Roger Mortimer de chirk made this castle. The chirk castle is a 700 year old marcher fortress,witch commands fine views over the surrounding countryside.The castle was sold for 5,000 UK pounds to sir Thomas Myddelton in 1595.His descendants continue to live in part of the castle today.There are interesting myths or legends about the originred hand in the Myddelton coat-of-arms. Janya i really like how you wrote lot's of interisting information by Sauviri.  

My weekend

1. 3 weeks ago on Sunday after 2 whole hours of math class my dad took me to my grandmas house.My Grandma’s house had finally finished being renovated.Only one person remade my Grandma’s house it looked brand new like it had never ever been renovated.At first i was SHOOK! I couldn't believe my eyes!the whole entire house looked magnificent.I looked all around the house it was like a miracle.I first ate some chips and then i had some Apple juice.There was no TV so then i tried to play studyladder and guess what happened next.To Be Continued ...  
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3. Wow janya i love how you have used the word magnificent,renovated and miracle from Sauviri .   

Janya’s slide 

 Hi Sauviri I am really looking forward to you helping me in my writing.

 My Whanau 

In the holidays I went to fiji with my mum, my dad, my sister and my brother.We drove to a huge eye catching hotel and the hotels name was sofitel .We had a tour all around and me my sister and brother liked the swimming pool the best because it was huge and had a medium sized flowery island .When we came out from the pool I had a short turn on a boogie board then we went to our hotel number ate some delicious pizza and went to bed.

Haunted Orphanage

    Haunted Orphanage!!!  

After I came back from My friends birthday party I was on my way home when suddenly I saw an old looking orphanage so I gently pushed open the rough rusty gate. I was so scared the gate made a creaking noise suddenly fog burst everywhere it smelt like a graveyard after all I wasn't scared at all!!! “AAAHHH”! I felt someone touch my shoulder I plunged across some slimy gooey water and ran inside the orphanage behind me I slammed the door BANG! I walked quietly up the stairs.To be continued...   

                                     Haunted Orphanage